CommentsDevious Comments ^0^ Thanks for the wonderful crits dear!
Im going to work on Dronnies arm a little more and get some better details on the hair. I have no idea how to make Drix look better....hopefully, I'll figure something out! This has helped loads  You give brilliant crits. Not harsh or nasty but still pointing out what needs changing   -- Commissions at stupidly low prices!! [link] ~Boba-Fett-Fan-Club~avpalternative~Raistlin-Majere-club  Haha. That's because there's no need for nasty crits or anything.
Im sure after some work though, this peice is going to be brillent! As for Drix, I think it looks okay. I mean, seriously I didn't know how you wanted him til I read your comments on the picture ^^.   -- [link] I'm Egypt~ I'm Egypt~  ^^
Someone else said Drix looks ok as well....I think maybe Im trying to put him in an impossible possition  I think I will leave him as he is now ^^-- Commissions at stupidly low prices!! [link] ~Boba-Fett-Fan-Club~avpalternative~Raistlin-Majere-club Yeah. ^^ Im thinking that the position you want is kinda like one I drew (I don't know if the picture is uploaded on here yet)....But I think you'd have to change the viewpoint to get the position right xD You have a facing and pretty much horizontal, and yeah....It looks good like it is now ^^ *hugs* Sorry I ranted. I rant when in pain x.x
-- [link] I'm Egypt~ I'm Egypt~ Hardly a rant! In pain?
-- Commissions at stupidly low prices!! [link] ~Boba-Fett-Fan-Club~avpalternative~Raistlin-Majere-club Yeah. I've been working out again, started out slow by just talking long walks through town (I live with a lot of hills that most people would call mountains *I did before I moved out here!*). Well now EVERY muscle is in pain and sore and I hard a bad headache yesterday from my friend's ditzy sister flopping unto the bed my head was leaning against!-- [link] I'm Egypt~ I'm Egypt~ |
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Starting off with the good things.
I love the expressions and the pose in general. It really shows a lot about the characters and even though it's a sketch it still leads in the right direction as to what you seemed to be aiming for.
The hair is beautiful, the detail is excellent and I think if this peice was given more attention it might turn out to be a really good one.
The few problems I see is the angle that Drix is. It's not so much a problem as the fact that it wasn't how you wanted it. At first glance I thought it looked okay, like Drix was laying on Dron. But after reading you're comment, I can see why it looked off a bit. The other body problem that bothers me is Dron's arm in the back (His right one? I have no clue). It seems off a bit, however that could just be the fact that it's sketched looser than the rest.
That's all I have to say! Good work!